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For me there are two sections to this picture. The water and background, then the foreground.

The water section is great. I guess I can say perfect. The clouds in the sky wrap right around it, and the gradient across the water is excellent. The snow capped hills in the background just add that extra touch to the picture.

But there's the foreground. It's messy I think. A different angle, from lower down, may have worked. Cropping in is another idea too. That green branch sticking out is a real shame, it intrudes into the sea which I love.

Basically just try different angles with this kind of photo, especially when the ground is cluttered like that.

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:iconmisantropia:
Great colors.
Nice perspective.
Good view.

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:icontheswimmingstar:
Beautiful photo! Really stunning! I love the sky, how the two clouds from two different directions come together. I also love how the wetter seems pretty good, but in the far you can see snow on the mountains. I also adore the colours. They are so beautiful and so pure I really love them. I also think the composition is good. You captured so many different aspects of nature. The trees, water, snow, mountains, clouds and sky. Amazing! It is however a bit of a shame for the composition that the tree on the middle left is bowed so in front. But that's nature I guess. I really think this shot is beautiful and therefore I'll definitely will add it to my favs!
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Thanks for the detailed comment :)

The weather was excellent, the snow must have been quite old ...
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Amazing photo!! I loved the sky and clouds. The colours are soo good too.
Nice work!! <333

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NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D80
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F/10.0
10 mm
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Jul 24, 2008, 2:38:24 PM

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